Sorry for taking so long to comment on that first map. I think it looks good. I've never played the game but it really helps that the areas are linked logically and connecting arrows aren't going all over the map. My only criticism is that it's not completely obvious at first glance what is a room and what is a cinematic, but I have no idea how to differenciate them (differently colored border maybe?) but that's just me. I'm eager to see more
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"With the first link, the chain is forged. The first speech censored, the first thought forbidden, the first freedom denied, chains us all irrevocably." [...] The first time any man's freedom is trodden on, we're all damaged. - Captain Jean-Luc Picard
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